WALT write a limerick with the correct rhyming and rhythm pattern
There was an old man named leary.
Who dreamed he was a fairy
He woke at nigth
Feeling terrble brigth
So he went to collect some berries.
Tuesday, November 13, 2012
metaphor poem
WALT use metaphors in poems.
He is a dolphin
swimming swiftly in the water .
He is a monkey
swing from tree to
tree .
he is a cheeta
running as fast as
a bullet .
he is a lion
killing with his
razor sharp claws.
He is a bear
ripping his prey to bits
In his kingdom killing others.
He is a prince.
He is a dolphin
swimming swiftly in the water .
He is a monkey
swing from tree to
tree .
he is a cheeta
running as fast as
a bullet .
he is a lion
killing with his
razor sharp claws.
He is a bear
ripping his prey to bits
In his kingdom killing others.
He is a prince.
Tuesday, November 6, 2012
My Athletic sport poem
WALT...use poetic verse to recount a memory.
The Athletic sports were usual enough; They had
the high jump, the long jump, the long distance run,
the tiring and exhausting sprints . my friends, my class mates and i
did what boys do -lay down on the
soft grass,made an effot to qualify for zones, ran as fast as a mad man ,hurled the shot like valerie adams tring to win,tired
as if we had ran a maraton, ran or fired
just tring to keep fit,
doing nothing important .
The Athletic sports were usual enough; They had
the high jump, the long jump, the long distance run,
the tiring and exhausting sprints . my friends, my class mates and i
did what boys do -lay down on the
soft grass,made an effot to qualify for zones, ran as fast as a mad man ,hurled the shot like valerie adams tring to win,tired
as if we had ran a maraton, ran or fired
just tring to keep fit,
doing nothing important .
Monday, September 24, 2012
Monday, September 17, 2012
Thursday, August 30, 2012
Thursday, August 16, 2012
My Holiday In Blenheim
My Holiday In Blenheim
In the first school holidays in 2012 my mum,brothers and I were so excited about going to my auntie’s in blenheim so we rushed to the car like a jet plane zooming across the sky to its destination.
When we arrived I ran around the garden. I felt like a monkey swing from vine to vine a colossal jungle filled with fruit, berry trees and flowers.
We went in to my auntie new house,it looked like a castle filled with electronics inside. I was so amazed! my auntie told my brothers and I that we were going to sleep in a tent . The tent was as gigantic as my mum’s room.
On the first night we heard lots of possums. The next day we went fishing. My mum caught a crayfish carcass. Apart from that we didn’t catch anything.
It was on the third sparkly night that the fun began. We roasted marshmallows on a bonfire we stayed up to midnight blowing bubbles and eating marshmallows. The moon was like a sparkly disco ball shining in the night sky .
In the morning we had to leave but I didn’t want to go.
We had so much fun.
By Oliver Burgess
What: WALT recount our experiences,thoughts and feelings in a way that is interesting to our readers.
So What: We had to write about a journey that we went on.
then we put interesting words in our storys.
Now What: now were doing a story about a challenging time.
In the first school holidays in 2012 my mum,brothers and I were so excited about going to my auntie’s in blenheim so we rushed to the car like a jet plane zooming across the sky to its destination.
When we arrived I ran around the garden. I felt like a monkey swing from vine to vine a colossal jungle filled with fruit, berry trees and flowers.
We went in to my auntie new house,it looked like a castle filled with electronics inside. I was so amazed! my auntie told my brothers and I that we were going to sleep in a tent . The tent was as gigantic as my mum’s room.
On the first night we heard lots of possums. The next day we went fishing. My mum caught a crayfish carcass. Apart from that we didn’t catch anything.
It was on the third sparkly night that the fun began. We roasted marshmallows on a bonfire we stayed up to midnight blowing bubbles and eating marshmallows. The moon was like a sparkly disco ball shining in the night sky .
In the morning we had to leave but I didn’t want to go.
We had so much fun.
By Oliver Burgess
What: WALT recount our experiences,thoughts and feelings in a way that is interesting to our readers.
So What: We had to write about a journey that we went on.
then we put interesting words in our storys.
Now What: now were doing a story about a challenging time.
Thursday, July 26, 2012
Wednesday, June 13, 2012
Tuesday, May 29, 2012
Tuesday, May 15, 2012
Canterbury Panels
WALT: Make up our own symbols about our local area.
So What: We used rotation, translation and reflection of koru patterns to represent parts of Canterbury. I drew koru patterns in the river to represent the waves.
I learned how to draw koru pattens to make them look like waves in the water.
Next Step: My next step is to not rush and to do my work neater .
Tuesday, May 8, 2012
Reading
What: WALT use strategies to deepen our vocabulary knowledge
So What: we have been learing to answer questions with full sentences.
Now What: my next step is that i need to put more informaion into my sentences.
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So What: we have been learing to answer questions with full sentences.
Now What: my next step is that i need to put more informaion into my sentences.
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