My Holiday In Blenheim
In the first school holidays in 2012 my mum,brothers and I were so excited about going to my auntie’s in blenheim so we rushed to the car like a jet plane zooming across the sky to its destination.
When we arrived I ran around the garden. I felt like a monkey swing from vine to vine a colossal jungle filled with fruit, berry trees and flowers.
We went in to my auntie new house,it looked like a castle filled with electronics inside. I was so amazed! my auntie told my brothers and I that we were going to sleep in a tent . The tent was as gigantic as my mum’s room.
On the first night we heard lots of possums. The next day we went fishing. My mum caught a crayfish carcass. Apart from that we didn’t catch anything.
It was on the third sparkly night that the fun began. We roasted marshmallows on a bonfire we stayed up to midnight blowing bubbles and eating marshmallows. The moon was like a sparkly disco ball shining in the night sky .
In the morning we had to leave but I didn’t want to go.
We had so much fun.
By Oliver Burgess
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