Writing

The first example is a ad in the news paper, when a kid wanted to buy a phone for his dad, but then they tried to read the small printed text, but they couldn't eventully they found out that the small printed text had alot of important information in it as a resault this ad is unfortunately  misleading people.Consumers might not go to that manufacturer to buy stuff any more also consumers might have to pay more beacause they couldn't read the small printed text.

This piece of my writing shows 3 connectives

• Also
• Eventually
• Unfortunately

I beleive that i'm Multistructural because i can add multipal connectives but no i've got no clauses.
 My Next Step Is To add clauses