There was an error in this gadget

Tuesday, August 27, 2013

My poem

Heartbroken is birds dying from eating plastic.
Uneasy is millions of tons of plastic being made.
Letdown is animals making homes is plastic.
Dishonored is a bag of sand from Hawaii being contaminated with more than 90% plastic.
Do you litter?

I think Im Extended Abstract because Im made long sentences into short metaphors an i showed how sad or happy i was about it.

Thursday, August 15, 2013

My Passion Project

My Passion Project is a rap song. My Project is about making a rap song. I choose a rap song because i like singing and raping. i will know when i have finished my passion project when i have seeked feedback on how i can improve on making a rap song and i can teach others to create rap songs.

Friday, August 9, 2013

My Maths

listen to ‘Oliver's maths’ on Audioboo

WALT:Find fractions equivalent to one given.

i think im Extended Abstract because i can create something that teaches others to use the strategy 

Wednesday, August 7, 2013

My Commentary

listen to ‘Oliver's commentaries ’ on Audioboo


I gave detail about important stuff.

My next step is to speak louder when stuff gets exciting and use expression